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So. I've currently been obsessing over Star Trek XI and all the characters but specifically the new oldest slash pairing... Kirk/Spock. So I've submerged myself into the wonderful world of fandom for the past week or so and have come up with... porn fic. :) Yay! Well, more like the tiniest piece of fic of porn ever... but still. I'm tired.

Title: Sex and Orgasms
Author: futago_02
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: Apparently in Vulcan that meant “I want to have hot sexy man-loving with you all night long” because Spock abruptly launches a proposal. Of sorts.
Disclaimer: Don't own, but worship.





Once, Kirk, for lack of a better word, dated Spock. It involved long walks around the Enterprise, conversations about ship systems and foreign customs, and a weekly chess match. Well, Kirk thought maybe he was going in the right direction without actually saying anything. He was just waiting for the moment to make his move, since all he read from Spock was amused, pissed off, irritated, or just plain blankness.

The moment finally came while they were playing chess. Not for Kirk, but for Spock. All Kirk did was make eye contact, hold it a little too long, and say “Check.” Apparently in Vulcan that meant “I want to have hot sexy man-loving with you all night long” because Spock abruptly launches a proposal. Of sorts.

What he actually says is “Captain, it may appear to be out of line according to regulations, but it has occurred to me that we are both well matched, physically and mentally not unattractive to each other, and work well in each other’s company. As the ranking officers of this vessel, it may be inappropriate to form a romantic attachment to those with lower rank and experience, and as we are both men with stressful jobs I find it appropriate and logical to further our relationship.”

Kirk blinks. He runs the words through his mind again, then croaks out “What . . . kind of relationship are you proposing, exactly?”

Just because he was logical didn’t mean Spock wasn’t without tact. “A relationship based on mutual trust and attraction that goes beyond friendship.” Kirk waits. “One with sex and orgasms,” Spock finishes a little dryly, and Kirk suspects Spock was beginning to regret his suitability.

“Yes,” Kirk blurts, since he was never one to say no to sex.

It turns out Spock had been holding back all this time. Suddenly Spock was in front of Kirk’s chair, his tongue in Kirk’s mouth, one hand cupping the back of Kirk’s neck while the other palmed Kirk’s crotch. Kirk hardens and arches with a low groan only partially muffled as Spock kissed his way down. All the way down, as it turned out.

Breathing harshly, Kirk watches Spock wild eyed. Kneeling in between the v made by Kirk’s legs, he makes short work of pants and underwear, carefully releasing Kirk’s cock. It curves lonesome in the air against his shirt and Kirk scowls at it before being distracted by Spock’s sudden grabby nature. Contrary to his gentle behavior before, Spock grabs fierce possession of Kirk’s cock and pumps once. Twice. Kirk whines.

Spock looks up at him, his mouth lifted in a smirk. Irked, Kirk opens his mouth but nothing leaves it because Spock, still looking at him, opens his mouth and licks a drop of precum that had formed at the tip of Kirk’s cock. Tonguing his slit, Spock used his other arm to hold Kirk down as he bucks in the chair. Then Spock started sucking and that’s when Kirk loses it. The sound undoes him first, wet breathing and the smack of Spock's lips and tongue against his flesh, which only makes Kirk harder.

The sight of his cock disappearing between Spock’s stretched, green-tinged lips made him moan and clutch his armrests for control, then reach out to run his fingers through Spock’s straight, black hair. Spock hummed at that point, which had him tugging at Spock’s hair. He found himself babbling—“sorry, sorry, your hair, God it’s so soft, you’re so good, fuck, c’mon, I really, really, really, like you, you give the best blowjobs” and then it degrades to just “Spock, Spock, Spock, Spock.” He thinks Spock laughs at him, but it was hard to think since Spock’s throat constricts around him at the same time. He glares—or tried to—but that only made Spock laugh harder, and that’s when he comes.

Spock chokes in the midst of his laughter, which he thinks is only fair, and when Kirk can refocus and look down again Spock is wiping come from the corner of his mouth. But then he licks it off his fingers, closing his eyes in pleasure, and Kirk’s cock twitches hopefully before it lies still again.

“I’m rather partial to human semen,” is Spock’s answer to Kirk’s hungry look of inquiry. Kirk surprises himself by his rush of jealousy—who else has Spock taken for a lover? Who else got to see him kneeling and swallowing every last bit of their semen?

So Kirk snarls and licks his come out of Spock’s mouth before unfastening Spock’s pants and circling Spock’s cock with his hand. He begins moving his hand up and down, roughly squeezing. “I propose” he growls in Spock’s pointy ear “that you can have my semen any time you crave. But don’t,” and he nips the tip of Spock’s ear in emphasis “be getting any ideas about tasting any others.” Spock moans, and comes, spilling warmly over Kirk’s hand.

They breathe each other’s air for a while, before Spock says “That would be illogical.”


So... how's my first attempt at ficcage in a long time... and PWP?


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Excellent! PWP is my favorite anyway -- who has time for anything else? ;)

hahha. too true. Thanks for reading... it really has been too long since i've written fic.

This would be an excellent response to one of the prompts at the kink meme.

And of course, its hot. And Spock is love with his proposal.

thanks! even though I love the kink meme, I haven't been keeping up with it, unfortunately...

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Most brilliant proposal ever!
Great little ficlet, and HOT!

thank you so much! :) i'm happy you enjoyed it!

"What he actually says is “Captain, it may appear to be out of line according to regulations, but it has occurred to me that we are both well matched, physically and mentally not unattractive to each other, and work well in each other’s company. As the ranking officers of this vessel, it may be inappropriate to form a romantic attachment to those with lower rank and experience, and as we are both men with stressful jobs I find it appropriate and logical to further our relationship.”"
oh lol XD
great story! \o/

thank you!!! :D
so happy you like it!

I really liked the combination of hot sex and humour, styled in a way that is within character. Nicely done! Thank you.

You might want to consider posting this to:

http://community.livejournal.com/kirkspock

and also to the K/S archive - www.ks.archive.com

I look forward to more from your!

Amanda

wow, thank you so much! I'm happy with the way it turned out.
and i will post it to the kirkspock comm and the k/s archive... i'm just a newbie so i really appreciate it!

Heeee, you write excellent Spock. Yay for PWP.

thank you! i adore quinto!spock to tiny, tiny bits. :)

Woo, you're a good writer. This is me complimenting your style, not the hot mental images that anyone with half a grasp of the English language could have helped me imagine.

Now, this. This is me complimenting the hot mental images. Spock propositioning him over chess. Jim's babbling. All of that stuff.

That was hot.

THANK YOU! :) *blushes* your praise warms my heart.
i think kirk/spock encourages the hot mental images in all of us. XD

Excellent. You have fallen into my trap. *rips out your heart and eats it*

But seriously, yeah, anyone can write Spock/Kirk or any kind of slash with hot characters and if it's half decent, the brain of the reader does the rest. Which is why I object to people commenting with "OMG hot" when the author needs to go back to school for some literary lessons, and which is why I make the distinction to good writers that I want them for their brain, not the hotness of the actors.

Your brain. I wants you for it.

:D
I hadn't really considered how much work the brain of the reader does... hmm...
I confess... it's my first real pwp and i haven't written decent fanfiction in YEARS.
And there are a lot of good writers out on lj, which is why I shall say--You flatterer.
But I live for comments like yours. :)

Offers up brains while waiting for more writing inspiration to strike.

*fetches a knife and fork. Dines upon your brains*

OH FUCK A WASP sorry my housemate just ate a wasp.

Anyway. Yeah, there are a lot of good writers on LJ but a lot of bad ones too. Have you ever read something, decided it was terrible, decided to comment politely and tell them how they could improve and found a bunch of "OMG hott" comments?

oh EW. why in heavens would your housemate do such a thing?!

hahah. *cringe* i think i ran away in horror instead of doing the decent thing and commenting... but actually, yes i think i have.

(I said I'd pay him. He wanted twenty quid but settled for £1. What a n00b)

Yeah, I usually run away in horror, but occasionally I'm in a cranky enough mood to go "nuu, you are not gud wrighter!"

hahhaha! you crack me up. on both accounts. :)

Why, thank you. *tips hat*
(I bought a hat today. It is rather epic. It's almost half the size of me and keeps trying to eat me)

*laughs* Nicely done.

Loved how Kirk thought he was being subtle, suave and alone in his affections for Spock, when it was Spock who could barely prevent himself from jumping his bones!!

thank you! i wasn't sure if I conveyed that right, so it's nice to know!

"One with sex and orgasms"

that was a dynamite line, LOVE the way this is hot and funny, the best combination

thank you! :) i liked that line too.. which is why i made it the title! haha.

i also ADORE your icon.

gaaaaah


I WANT THAT PROPOSAL


this was really good, you kept them in character and it was light and funny but still really really hot.

Exactly the distraction I needed. Excellent!

*laughs* glad i could be a distaction. Thanks!

Hmm, I suppose my comment didn't get through... anyway I'm in awe of this fic, funny and hot at the same time. I love Spock's line of dialogue - he's one cute Vulcan when he's embarrassed!

aw... wait. actually, I think you commented on the community post rather than the one on my lj. So no worries!
But I'm glad you liked it enough to see it get through--thank you! I love embarrassed spock. :)

This is such fun and you have the voices spot-on.

hahah. THANK YOU. i also love your icon.. lol and his face!

I love how Spock remained logical throughout this whole thing xD And I really liked when Spock said, "I’m rather partial to human semen" xDDD

Very hot fic~^^

gah. :D your icon! hahahha
thanks so much! :) one of my fav lines, that one.

:DDDDDD
oh yeah
“I’m rather partial to human semen,” is Spock’s answer to Kirk’s hungry look of inquiry.
the end if just full of win

hahah. *beams* thank you so much!

That was incredibly hot! They have a somewhat strange dating method, but I can't argue about the results! *vbg*

Laura.

Very good! I love this pairing SO much! ;w;

I enjoyed Spock's proposal of them going out and how Kirk got jealous at the end! :D

I couldn't stop laughing at this

All Kirk did was make eye contact, hold it a little too long, and say “Check.” Apparently in Vulcan that meant “I want to have hot sexy man-loving with you all night long”

Excellent!

Thank you! It's always nice to hear feedback like yours. :D

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